This is my draft doument of my PDP
Above is a copy of my draft document of my PDP. I asked Keith Pullinger to go through my PDP and point out any improvements that may need to be sorted out and applied to this document.
I got Keith to go over my PDP and Keith gave me feedback on what I need to do to improve my work. So to repay him I went over his PDP to try and help him to improve his work and may even help to bump up his grade. I was looking for any mistakes which could lower his grade which would be little things like him missing a bit of punctuation like full stops, capital letters and other bits of punctuation.
Draft Games Design Document with comments
I asked Oliver to review my games design document. I asked him if he could go through my games design documents looking for any problems that need to be sorted, things like a comma needed, full stops missed, general punctuation error and terminology that is needed to be imputed. If anything was found Oliver left a comment pointing out the mistakes so that I could reprimand it.
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