This is my draft doument of my PDP
Above is a copy of my draft document of my PDP. I asked Keith Pullinger to go through my PDP and point out any improvements that may need to be sorted out and applied to this document.
I got Keith to go over my PDP and Keith gave me feedback on what I need to do to improve my work. So to repay him I went over his PDP to try and help him to improve his work and may even help to bump up his grade. I was looking for any mistakes which could lower his grade which would be little things like him missing a bit of punctuation like full stops, capital letters and other bits of punctuation.
Draft Games Design Document with comments
I asked Oliver to review my games design document. I asked him if he could go through my games design documents looking for any problems that need to be sorted, things like a comma needed, full stops missed, general punctuation error and terminology that is needed to be imputed. If anything was found Oliver left a comment pointing out the mistakes so that I could reprimand it.
Wednesday, 27 November 2013
Tuesday, 26 November 2013
PDP and Games design review (D2)
My Draft PDP
Completed PDP
I got someone to proof read my PDP and thanks to Keith, who gave me feedback on my work I was able to reprimanding all the punctual mistakes that I made within my PDP as well as imputing the terminology where possible.
What was the PDP made for?
It was made so that I could keep track of what I have learnt and how I have had to overcome some barriers so that I can learn the skills. it was also made so that I can use it at anytime if I wanted to recorded any skills that I have learnt. it also helps because it is some where that I can put any personal goals and set my self a time that I have to try to achieve them by.
My draft Games Design document with comments
My completed Games Design Document
I got Oliver to read and put comments on my Games design document and thanks to Oliver I was able to improve my Games design document and make it look more professional all the comments that he left I added what he said I need to add and have linked the completed document and the draft with comments above.
What was the games design document for?
Thanks to my games deign document I was able to learn new things such. I learnt how to make my games design document consistent which will make my work look more professional also I found out how long and how much work is put in to the creation of the game. I have also learnt about different styles of fonts that I can use to make things such as headings stand out over general text.
Completed PDP
I got someone to proof read my PDP and thanks to Keith, who gave me feedback on my work I was able to reprimanding all the punctual mistakes that I made within my PDP as well as imputing the terminology where possible.
What was the PDP made for?
It was made so that I could keep track of what I have learnt and how I have had to overcome some barriers so that I can learn the skills. it was also made so that I can use it at anytime if I wanted to recorded any skills that I have learnt. it also helps because it is some where that I can put any personal goals and set my self a time that I have to try to achieve them by.
My draft Games Design document with comments
My completed Games Design Document
I got Oliver to read and put comments on my Games design document and thanks to Oliver I was able to improve my Games design document and make it look more professional all the comments that he left I added what he said I need to add and have linked the completed document and the draft with comments above.
What was the games design document for?
Thanks to my games deign document I was able to learn new things such. I learnt how to make my games design document consistent which will make my work look more professional also I found out how long and how much work is put in to the creation of the game. I have also learnt about different styles of fonts that I can use to make things such as headings stand out over general text.
Monday, 25 November 2013
Evaluate Game Pitch (D1)
Analyse
What did I have to do? Well I had to first use my written communicational skills to create a PowerPoint to do my game pitch. Then I had to use my spoken communicational skills along side with my body jesters to communicate effectively to the people I was presenting my game pitch to.
Assess
For my game pitch I had to put all of my worry's behind me so that I could give the best presentation I could do this by using the terminology generally correctly and consistently as well as being able to address the audience instead of staring at the bored and not keeping eye contact with the audience.
Evaluate
Even though I was worried about how my presentation was going to go I had my mined set on at least getting a merit. In my PowerPoint which you will see at the bottom of the page I used bullet points to remind me what I needed to say along with a couple of questions which I would answer so that I could explain everything I need to cover.
Comment critically
I think that my pitch went pretty well, but I had one problem which was pointed out by Richard and this was that I said maybe to much which meant that I wasn't 100% sure about my game which just sent me down to a merit.
Evaluate critically
The PowerPoint was good but I missed out some bits of terminology that was needed. So I should have put more terminology within the PowerPoint to remind me to use it but I was helped out by my class mates when they asked question at the end of the presentation so that I could bump my grade up.
Summaries
I managed to achieve a merit which I am kind of happy with but if I hadn't said maybe so much and put a bit more terminology in I would have been able to get a distinction but I am happy with a merit due to the fact that I get worried when I stand up in front of people and have to talk.
What did I have to do? Well I had to first use my written communicational skills to create a PowerPoint to do my game pitch. Then I had to use my spoken communicational skills along side with my body jesters to communicate effectively to the people I was presenting my game pitch to.
Assess
For my game pitch I had to put all of my worry's behind me so that I could give the best presentation I could do this by using the terminology generally correctly and consistently as well as being able to address the audience instead of staring at the bored and not keeping eye contact with the audience.
Evaluate
Even though I was worried about how my presentation was going to go I had my mined set on at least getting a merit. In my PowerPoint which you will see at the bottom of the page I used bullet points to remind me what I needed to say along with a couple of questions which I would answer so that I could explain everything I need to cover.
Comment critically
I think that my pitch went pretty well, but I had one problem which was pointed out by Richard and this was that I said maybe to much which meant that I wasn't 100% sure about my game which just sent me down to a merit.
Evaluate critically
The PowerPoint was good but I missed out some bits of terminology that was needed. So I should have put more terminology within the PowerPoint to remind me to use it but I was helped out by my class mates when they asked question at the end of the presentation so that I could bump my grade up.
Summaries
I managed to achieve a merit which I am kind of happy with but if I hadn't said maybe so much and put a bit more terminology in I would have been able to get a distinction but I am happy with a merit due to the fact that I get worried when I stand up in front of people and have to talk.
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